Children who are bought up in families that does not have lot of money are better prepared to deal with problems when they become adults than children who bought up by wealthy parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree
Every person in this world have to face problems in their life. Some children grown up under privileged are better prepare to face challenges rather than those who bought up in well of families. I agree with the statement up to some extent
Commenting with the reasons children with weak financial status transforms in a strong human because they have to face difficulties in early phase of their life. They do not have domestic caretakers that is why they have to do their daily household work such as buying groceries, cleaning home and many more at their own. However children who born with silver spoon are being pampered by their parents. They also have domestic care takers for daily household work, for this reason these children do not know how to handle the house work and also all the basic skills which children should know for example cleaning their room.
On the other hand, children who grown up with silver spoon can also deal with problems as their parents get them best education from reputated schools and colleges and under the guidance of well qualified teachers which make them capable for their future. In addition to this, they have strong social support system which help them to face big challenges in life and also there parents are well qualified and also they have financial knowledge which also help them a lot.
To conclude, every children is prepared with the challenges in life note by financial position of their parents but also by their ethics
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...eaning home and many more at their own. However children who born with silver spoon are...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'them the best'.
Suggestion: them the best
...deal with problems as their parents get them best education from reputated schools and co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85826771654 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24391489819 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523622047244 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8985073131 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.111111111 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286363584221 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136157856512 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721288349194 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18904937847 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767037312481 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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