it is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends.
I think it depends on the age and personality of the person who had transferred, But it won’t be a pleasant experience for me to lose my old friends at once. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
It’s not a piece of cake to find new friends when you are not a child anymore, especially in a totally different culture. Although it’s always refreshing to be in a brand-new place and hang out with people, it won’t feel like home for a tune of days till I finally can trust someone and make real friends as an introvert. Even when I was accepted in the university, it was also so hard for me for almost a year to finally make some friends and talk to someone happily and honestly and it led me to depression and anxiety. Secondly in my age everyone have made their ralatonships and have a busy lives. Every single person have to work hard, and also everyone have lots of serious responsibilities so It’s hard to reach out people.
Furthermore, it’s not important how hard I try, in the end I just can’t make friends like the old pals I had before. There is no trust in adulthood relationships, and no one who knows me the way my old friends do since I have been a little child. One of the reasons is that I became more independent compare to my childhood and don’t out much effort for finding bodies as I did before. I want to emigrate and I have some friends in my destination contry but I don’t consider applying in their cities university. Ofcourse it would be great to live with my old friends in the same city and not to suffer from the lack of intimacy but it’s not a goal in our lives anymore.
In conclution, I agree that it would be so hard to leave your friend behind, and this is because it’s hard to find new relationships and you can never feel the same intimacy you had with old friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...made their ralatonships and have a busy lives. Every single person have to work hard,...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35142857143 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60167763772 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505714285714 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8168885699 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.153846154 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176849588277 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647624087114 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309599570323 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11363106746 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.008229777254 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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