The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia Europe and the rest of the world

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The bar graph shows the total manufacturing production in percentages Asia, Europe, and the rest of the world.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of manufacturing production in Asia, Europe and the rest of the global between 1840 and 2000.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that while Asia and Europe's nmubers are in decline, Asia is on the rise, The rest of the world experienced the most steady increase and by the end was second to Asia in production.

In 1840, Asia stood at the first place with a proportion of 50% closely followed by Europe with 40 % and the rest of the world at 10%. This trend reversed in the next forty years, Europe leading the pack with around 45% whereas Asia in the second place drastically reduced to 30% and the other countries saw a quick rise to 25%.

Europe steadily increased to contribute 50% of world's manufacturing production in 1940, while Asia's contribution continued to decline to 20% and the rest of the world increased to 30%. Asia rose quickly to 25% in 1960 and 45% in 2000, in contrast Europe declined over the surveyed period to reach approximately 28% in 2000

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, whereas, while, in contrast, in the second place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76243093923 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68440193832 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4788973166 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.666666667 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1666666667 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345579001196 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184517196811 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995788905625 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231615833935 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721469364271 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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