Nowadays people tend to have children at an older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages.
In this modern era, there is a tendency of the individuals to give birth their first child in an older age. I consent to be more advantageous for several reasons which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, in my point of view, the benefit of postponing to bear a child is the individuals could be more ready financially to avoid the family funding problem. in terms of growing up the child, financial stable is pivotal thing to provide what the child’s need. Subsequently, they would avoid the financial problem which could probably affect for their children. Furthermore, people could prepare themselves mentally to be a parent. Due to the readiness (understanding the parenting concept), their children would grow up from mother and father who could give them appropriate approach affecting their faculty (emotionally and intellectually).
On the flip side, it is undeniable that this view bring drawback which could affect to decreasing the people’s fertility. This occurs since the older people are, the more decreasing their fertility is influenced by their hormone. As a result, they would extremely hard to have a child probably bringing on the affair. In addition, the age gap between parents and child would be the another one. In regard to the parenting concept, the parents would treat their children as them received at the past instead of treating their children as the children’s era. it would lead child to have an inharmonic relationship between parents.
To sum up, the people’s tendency of postponing to have a child would bring several disadvantageous in some extent. Meanwhile, I would be more advantageous including the family financial stable and readiness mentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, while, in addition, as a result, in regard to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19784172662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94943191052 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9231032763 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181594502403 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066688368475 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483354385028 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126564902211 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573529326958 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.