The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the optimal tactic to address problems of surrounding is to hike up the petrol’s price. From my perspective, I cannot consider myself as an advocate of this perception.
To begin with, without a shadow of a doubt, increasing the expense of fuel is not the most appropriate approach to solve the environment’s troubles. It is obvious that residents’ demand for using oil is elastic owing to the petrol powered vehicles. In other words, in spite of the ever-increasing rise in this energy source, dwellers still have the needs to afford it. For instance, regardless of the growth in petrol’s price, the Vietnamese rushed to buy gasoline because of the needs for traveling such as going to school or going to work. Thus, this is not an effective solution to get the environment protected.
While an ineffective impact of the increase in the fuel’s price is widely acknowledged, there is a wealth of more far-reaching alternatives to tackle environmental issues. Due to the carbon-free function, electricity means of transport running on renewable energy do not deteriorate the environmental quality such as air quality. Vinfast, an illustrious car maker of Vietnam, can be cited as an outstanding example. Not only does it come up to the traveling demand of citizens but it also does not have a negative influence on the atmosphere standard. Therefore, to reduce the amount of toxic exhaust fumes which can protect the environment, using sustainable energy transportation should be taken into consideration.
To conclude, increasing the price of fuel is not an efficient way. Instead of that, people should make best of other choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st, an illustrious car maker of Vietnam, can be cited as an outstanding example. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, in other words, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19927536232 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22224100806 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7846509744 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176030007912 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563794152916 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692723566759 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108907056584 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565652232385 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.