Describe the information in the chart below.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five different consumer goods, namely cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in France and the UK in 2010.
Overall, from the graph it is clear that the UK consumed more goods than France in the period given. Both the British and the French expended most of their money on cars, whereas the least amount of money was spent on perfume in the UK compared to cameras in France.
Turning to the details, people in the UK used cars at just over 450,000 pounds slightly more than in France, which stood at 400,000 pounds. Following that, the spending of the British on books was also higher than that of the French, around 400,000 and 300,000 pounds respectively. However, a significant difference in the expenditure of two countries could be observed in the figures for cameras: France spent only 150,000 pounds sterling, as opposed to the UK, which spent 350,000 pounds.
On the other hand, people in France were more interested in computers and perfume than people in the UK. Exactly 350,000 pounds was spent by the British on computers, which was slightly less than the French who spent over 350,000. Neither of two countries paid much for the perfume which was counted for 200,000 pounds of the expenditure in France but under 150,000 pounds in the UK.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85398230088 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36046499067 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6477526361 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.888888889 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0118960014776 0.215688989381 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00698292128385 0.103423049105 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197506839692 0.0843802449381 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0157115728887 0.15604864568 10% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02721324251 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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