3. People are surrounded by many kinds of advertising which can influence their life. Does the positive effect of this trend outweigh negative effects?（
In this day and age, we are increasingly surrounded by advertising by companies, and it has become an indispensable part of our lives. I think that the demerits exceed the positive impact.
Advertising brings a benefit to people's lives because it bridges the gap between the consumers and manufacturers. It is a modern way of raising awareness about a particular product. It is hard for customers to buy merchandise without knowing anything, so advertisements can increase potential customers’ knowledge of the goods. As a result, they can find the best deals and specific products effectively and easily. For instance, as my mother gains useful information about clothes, appliances, and technical gadgets by watching tv commercials, shopping is simpler and more time-efficient.
Nevertheless, I firmly believe that the adverse impacts of advertising override its advantage. Firstly, advertisements directed at children make them believe that consumerism is a natural, healthy aspect of life. Take my experience, for example, my younger cousins firmly believe that possessing goods such as automobiles, high-end brands of bags, and portable devices are the main criterion for happiness after they watched advertisements on the Internet. Monopoly in industry is another disadvantage because this phenomenon reduces healthy competition, and it becomes difficult for new firms to enter the field. Lastly, it triggers impulse buying since it tempts consumers to spend a large amount of money purchasing unnecessary things unconsciously.
In conclusion, advertising has become a source of information about goods, but I still think that the disadvantages it brings predominate its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70355731225 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33924028895 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6342077868 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135380301623 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453885838103 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036629412418 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768461221652 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341786597833 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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