Some students prefer classes with frequent discussion between the professor and students with almost no lectures. Other prefer classes with many lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer?
In between the lecture some pupils like to have a discussion while some do not like it just they want a straight forward lectures. However,I prefer to have a interactive classes and I will put my this view with specific reason and interesting examples in the following essay.
Firstly,to discuss any of the topic in class helps in remembering as well as creates memories for the scenes we have created during discussions.It helps students as well as trainee to focus on a topic because they not get caught i.e.create awareness among all. Moreover, while debating we get more ideas about topic because everyone has different views and perspective of mind like Dr.APJ Abdul Kalam had a unique mindset. Furthermore he had done many researchers we are appreciating today.
Secondly, this develops communication skill and removes the fear of speaking in front of public and can face public in future.It builds a confidence among the child to be a better gentleman.For example a little girl once got a prize in her elocution competition and reached at the national level conference is one due to communication skill developed in her early life.
I conclude that debating lectures are more advantageous for students because everyone takes part in the topic.Therefore, lecture with debates is a better solution for young ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 217.0 407.700716846 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10138248848 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98003863999 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.524837075471 125% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.6154340442 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.142857143 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.2857142857 5.45110844103 317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177389297622 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780476429667 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663854548764 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108278367676 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884519414662 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 11.7677419355 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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