You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing;
express concern about the missing card and
ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to bring to your notice a recent request that I had made to your bank branch in MG road. I had asked the bank to provide me an expression debit card. The manager had approved the same and I was supposed to receive my card by last week. However, I have not received the card yet.
Firstly, let me provide you with the details and purpose of my writing. I am Madhulika Banerji and have saving bank account with your branch for almost a decade now. The customer id issued to me is GHYRHT and the account number is 855698566. The reason I am writing this letter is that though the bank is claiming to have sent the card and new pin details, I have only received the pin details and not the card. Since I did not receive the card, I, therefore, cannot give the acknowledgment receipt of the card.
Adding the above point, I am absolutely sure that my card has not been stolen as the envelope was sealed when I had found it in my mailbox. My concern, however, is that the employee forgot to place the card inside the envelope. This is a very horrible service and would definitely spoil the reputation of the bank if it continues.
In the end, all I request from you is to investigate this matter as soon as possible and also issue a new debit card to my address. I am hoping that strict action will be taken so that mistake is not repeated ever again. I will be providing my acknowledgment of the card received only after I get the card. Please feel free to contact me at my mobile number in case required.
Yours sincerely,
Madhulika Banerji
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33445945946 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41797269353 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52027027027 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3047166667 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4705882353 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337849461398 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986342488861 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683347650654 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191927378522 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771350843929 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.