Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the period of technology, many people are argued that artificial intelligence brings a variety of benefits for human life. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this notion and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why people worry about the development of artificial technology. The first reason is that artificial intelligence can replace humans in many kinds of work. Since they can work 24 hours without breaking time, and more accurately than people. Therefore, people can be affected by reducing workers in labor markets, and face up with jobless. A study predicted that about 50% of various careers will use robots or technology instead of humans. Furthermore, when computers are more intelligent than humans, a war between people and robots might happen. Since robots might make their own decisions without being given permission from humans, so there will be some dangers that people can not predict.
Explaining some of supporting points in favour this statement, it is true that artificial intelligence has endless advantages for our life. Firstly, artificial intelligence plays an important role in many fields of health. Nowadays, robots are used to treat some diseases that need surgery. As they can room imagine thousand times, access and find exactly some location in human body that human eyes can’t see. In addition, It helps people to live in a moderation life. Robots, AI can do housework, take care pets, or do anything so people might spend time unwinding, playing with their peers, their children,... For example, a research showed that 80% of people prefer having robots to help them in their life.
In conclusion, the improvements of technology have a lot of merits for humans., I believe that aforementioned points are strongly supporting my view point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19536423841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76950483131 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3945919448 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24486098536 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820157750088 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559605563283 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131827676163 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472416983378 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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