Nowadays university education is very expensive. Some people say that universities should reduce their fees, especially for the less fortunate students or those coming from rural areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Currently, some people argue that universities should decrease their payments for unfortunate students or those living in mountainous areas because of their expensive costs. From my standpoint, I completely agree with this suggestion due to some fundamental reasons exemplified in this essay.
In my opinion, some universities require costly fees from students and their families although I can understand it is partly because their education systems were more developed. In Viet Nam, most top universities tend to separate from ministry education in order to have rights to decide their own finances. Therefore, a new policy which requires higher payments from students has appeared so that universities can face up to financial issues. For instance, National Economics University - a prestigious school in Viet Nam has increased their costs to 40 million dong per year, which is a burden for people who do not have a good background.
Due to those above problems, most unfortunate or those living far away from urban areas cannot afford to attend their dream universities. These can become an advantage for wealthy students because they can have more opportunities to reach their goal, whereas it can be a disadvantage for impoverished counterparts. Moreover, this issue also results in fewer appearances of talents and the decrease in the educated proportion of a nation. Hence, the support from governments as well as universities is necessary to address this problem.
In conclusion, despite expensive payments from universities, I believe that unfortunate students or those coming from small cities still have opportunities to pursue the university degree if they receive support in terms of finance.
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Suggestion:
.... From my standpoint, I completely agree with this suggestion due to some fundame...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51136363636 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05728853266 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.233730943 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.272727273 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351968916745 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135070816346 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062965810385 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224103505015 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684238214867 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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