Social media platforms are becoming more and more popular among young people.
Why is this the case?
Do you think this is an positive or negative development?
In the era of fast-growing society, cutting-edge technology plays an essential role in human’s life. The youngsters seem to depend on social media platforms more and more. The essay below will analyze some causes, and, in my opinion, this phenomenon is a negative trend overall.
To begin with, there are two major elements that contribute to the success of online platforms in attracting young people. Firstly, the development of society is associated with the demand for a more effective entertainment form. Therefore, social media platforms are considered as the best choices which are the initiative sources of various latest trends followed by the young. For example, Vietnamese youngsters are now addicted to phenomenal BTS whom they can seek out on media platforms such as: Youtube or Vlive most. Secondly, these applications provide students with an infinite range of information and sufficient conditions for their study as … . In practice, Youtube allows pupils to come into contact with plentiful academic lessons without any payment.
Talking about its demerits, this aforementioned situation is disadvantageous in two main aspects, one of which is that it leads to a sedentary lifestyle since users merely need to stay at home and experience these functions for both entertaining and studying. Moreover, social media sites make youngsters become inactive in acquiring new knowledge or developing their talents. The fact that every-single information gained from online platforms is available, but they are basically theories with no opportunities for younger demographics to put it to use. Hence, people can be limited to get hands-on practical chances to master interpersonal skills and advance their natural gifts.
In conclusion, enhancing the role of social media platforms might result in several negative consequences. The young should be wise in using these devices to create positive outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, talking about, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5612244898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00831749411 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676870748299 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0597574009 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256600046757 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793056967838 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712650215044 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15314775439 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470286990363 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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