Undeveloped countries suffered the most from quarantine during covid-19 pandamic. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
Covid-19 is ubiquitous since past few year and many people lost their lives during that period. In the given scenario, it is said the countries that undergo with repercusion of covid was the undeveloped one. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that undoubtedly developing countries had to face more ramification as compared to the developed one. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, when the covid began to exit there was no any cure of it in the first place. To be more precise, it was the later invention of medicine however many countries could not afford it. This was not because of the high price of medicine but lack of technology to bring to the desired place. Similary, this pity condition of nation compelled to live with the quarantine without expecting the solution of it. For instance, if the government is poor then the citizen have to be deprived of facilities such as medicine and so on as they cannot afford. Therefore, undeveloped nation suffered the most during the pandemic which was not the case with affluent nation.
Next, usually people of developing country depend on their day to day work. In addition, when the covid happened their daily job stopped as well since there was a lockdown throughout the country resulting no access to outside world. This created the toughest situation to all. Drawing from my own experience, back then when covid was spreading worldwide, we were confined to our own house. We could go outside for any kind of purpose be it office or even to the hospital. We had to stay home quarintine instead going to the medical. Hence, this situation of mine prove how hard it was to survive in such a dreadful situation.
All things considered, indeed not only the people but the nation as a whole suffered the consequences of severe disease called covid as they didn’t have the option rather than to accept. Nevertheless, the situation has been improving although in a slow pace but is being better with the availability of covid injection free of cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
Covid-19 is ubiquitous since past few year and many people lost their lives during...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring that period. In the given scenario, it is said the countries that undergo wi...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... when the covid began to exit there was no any cure of it in the first place. To b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n of it. For instance, if the government is poor then the citizen have to be depr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, kind of, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65999866563 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567796610169 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7627374138 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0526315789 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175246622618 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488613520099 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548177786415 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105133622815 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342608629795 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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