In some cities, there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings, and owners can decide on this style of their houses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks?
Recently, in a number of towns, there are less policies of the shape and structure of houses and other infrastructures and the owners can design their own style. Personally, I opine this issue has several benefits which I will explain in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, we should not ignore the positive of few regulations of house development and other building projects that the building which is managed by personal get their dream design. They could manage their own budget to purchase basic materials of dwelling place such as, furniture and interior. Furthermore, in marketing strategy, this opportunity could design their store with unique concept, to make visitors interested and comfortable. To exemplify, currently the youngsters prefer to natural coffee shop concept than ordinary one.
On the other hand, this view has been obvious to me giving several disadvantages that the owner who lacks knowledge about standard building structure could get some drawbacks. Due to inappropriate material selection, unsubstantial construction can cause double maintenance service such as, cracking wall and leaking roof. Moreover, several store buildings with government regulation have to follow the rules in order that the city looks better. Unfortunately, this city layout brings significant limitations on expanding businesses purposes. For example, government imposes the strict regulations of exterior design and parking lot which could reduce the profit of businesses.
To conclude, while the benefit of this policy seems reasonable for some points, I would argue that less regulations of the models and structure of buildings have huge impacts. This includes estimated cost controlled by the house owner and the innovation of marketing strategy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun policies is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...cently, in a number of towns, there are less policies of the shape and structure of ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun regulations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ble for some points, I would argue that less regulations of the models and structure...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61567164179 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92419971516 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634328358209 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8376056904 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330574870086 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103315419501 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691675458803 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196529227298 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205393568608 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun policies is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...cently, in a number of towns, there are less policies of the shape and structure of ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun regulations is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ble for some points, I would argue that less regulations of the models and structure...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61567164179 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92419971516 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634328358209 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8376056904 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330574870086 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103315419501 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691675458803 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196529227298 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205393568608 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.