Test 1 : scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings .Some people find it a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People’s opinion differ as to whether or not the computer is a advantageous development.There are some many evidence supporting this former view, but I personally advocate this view that computers will get smarter than humans is a drawback.
There are various reasons why they think that it’s beneficial. Firstly, because of the advance of the computer , they can do everything such as homework; go shopping;… easily without being tired. For example, in rainy days , you can work at home or have a online meeting with clients through computers instead of commuting to the workplace. Furthermore, computers is the means which can create the multicultural environment in the social network so that we can chat with international friends. Therefore, there is no need to oppose such a progress.
Yet, I agree with those who argue that it’s a negative. This is simply because that can result in the dependence of the people on computers . As a result, along with the evolution of computers, people can easily get addicted or distract by computers,leading to poor performances at work or study. Additionally, spending too much time on virtual world through computers is detrimental to people’s physical and mental health. For example, being in front of the screen of computers can harm to your eyes.
In conclusion , it seems to me that it would be better for us not to rely on computers too much because it is just a artificial intelligence innovation which cannot replace us in the future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much evidence', 'a good deal of evidence'.
Suggestion: much evidence; a good deal of evidence
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10724572572 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613821138211 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5179525519 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168839328906 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568166423935 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562453100982 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108526556164 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635578287483 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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