The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in chester from 2002 to 2007.
The bar chart illustrates the time in every weeks that the young people leisure to do some rush in chester between 2022 untul 2007.
Overall, all categories of teenagers activities in every years was fluctuated. Watching television was the most biggest activity that people spending time in every week. Bowling became a lowest rate for person do that job.
In term of watching television, for every years showed increased constantly in each year, in 2002 total of hours people do this activity 25 per week and this amount was the same with the next year in 2003, whereas, the end of period this activity was rose until almost 40 hours per week for people spending time to do this. Moreover, watching DVDs have a lot of buff to do this activity with achievement around 10 and 15 hours per week and peak of this action was in about 15 and 20 hours every weeks people waste time for do it. In addition, young people to spend time for going to pubs was completely stable in every years, starting from 2002 most of teenagers do this activity with percentage around 5 and 10 hours per week and indicated very stable for the next year until 2007 was successful to reached point around 15 and 20 hours for people spending the timw for go to discos.
On the other hand, minority of young people leisure the time for go bowling place and spending time almost 5 hours per week in 2002, while, till the end of period people that like this activity declined sustained and only spending time almost nothing or slightly above 0. This case almost same with people do some activities of sport and made homework, all people only can waste time for 10 and around 10 until 15 hours per week respectively in 2002, whereas in the next year both of this activities degenerated steadily with 0 until 5 and 5 until 10 hours every weeks per 2007 respectively. Some of this categories was proved that the fans of this activities very lowest than another activities.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'biggest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: biggest
...fluctuated. Watching television was the most biggest activity that people spending time in e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the biggest'.
Suggestion: most the biggest
...fluctuated. Watching television was the most biggest activity that people spending time in e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ding time in every week. Bowling became a lowest rate for person do that job. In...
^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the teenagers') or simply say ''most teenagers''.
Suggestion: most of the teenagers; most teenagers
...able in every years, starting from 2002 most of teenagers do this activity with percentage around...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... 2002, whereas in the next year both of this activities degenerated steadily with 0 ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 600, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ry weeks per 2007 respectively. Some of this categories was proved that the fans of ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 644, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... categories was proved that the fans of this activities very lowest than another act...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59654178674 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34402213821 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412103746398 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 283.868780488 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.582115329 43.030603864 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319883945657 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150285069962 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688126846127 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215415439036 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445510959253 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'biggest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: biggest
...fluctuated. Watching television was the most biggest activity that people spending time in e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the biggest'.
Suggestion: most the biggest
...fluctuated. Watching television was the most biggest activity that people spending time in e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ding time in every week. Bowling became a lowest rate for person do that job. In...
^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the teenagers') or simply say ''most teenagers''.
Suggestion: most of the teenagers; most teenagers
...able in every years, starting from 2002 most of teenagers do this activity with percentage around...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 484, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... 2002, whereas in the next year both of this activities degenerated steadily with 0 ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 600, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ry weeks per 2007 respectively. Some of this categories was proved that the fans of ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 644, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... categories was proved that the fans of this activities very lowest than another act...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 347.0 196.424390244 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59654178674 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34402213821 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412103746398 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 283.868780488 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.582115329 43.030603864 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319883945657 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150285069962 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688126846127 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215415439036 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445510959253 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.