As countries develop , more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages ?
Over the past decades, technological development-associated issue have never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. It is universally acknowledged that an increasing number of individuals purchase and possess their private cars thanks to the national economic progress. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative impacts in equal measure.
On the other hand, the trend of more residents equipping themselves with at least one car can bring a number of possible benefits to themselves and the business. Firstly, cars play an important role in our daily lives, cars not only make us more convenient to move, but also bring us comfort. For example, in each car, there are appliances associated with life to create comfort such as air conditioners, sofas, etc. Besides, when the weather changes, cars also help us protect our health, typically avoiding harsh sunshine and storms. Second, the growth of the automobile manufacturing industry drives the growth of the transportation services industry. Thereby helping thousands of people get jobs and reducing the unemployment rate of our country.
However, the aboved mentioned arguments can also be considered from the opposite angle. One of the causes of great harm to the environment is the fact that too many people own cars. For example, at peak hours when everyone uses a car, it will cause traffic jams that hinder movement. Last but not least is the financial issue, when buying a car costs 1, it costs 10 to take care of that car. For example, the monthly amount of gas spent is very high, in addition, if someone's house does not have a place to park, it also costs more to rent a parking space.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the trend towards a rising number of civilians possesing cars could exert both equally beneficial and detrimental implications while this trend could allow people lead a convenient and comfortable and it can destroy the environment and nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07716049383 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87824321884 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623456790123 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4621231638 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226157430932 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605027937777 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374458842886 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119304462641 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133300543224 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.