The graph and the chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. The pie chart shows reason for migration in 2008.
The line graph and pie chart show the move on to the UK from 2000 to 2008. The pie chart displays diverse range of motives behind immigration to the UK in the year 2008.
According to the chart, during the period in the UK the number of year stayed in UK in 2008 dramatically increased, while in 2004 saw significant decline, with the predominant reason being job-oriented.
Look at the line graph, the number of year stayed in the UK in 2004 ( up 2 to 4 years) is lowest among three timelines received 5000, up to 2 years is highest received 150000 and four more years no figures available in 2000. Meanwhile, the intended length of stay immigrant to the UK in 2008 significantly increased when from 5000 to 100000 ( 2 to 4 years). By contrast, the length of stay in UK of four more years significantly increased when from 0 to 250000. During the following quarter, four or more years is lowest among three timelines.
Look at the second chart is pie chart, the reason for migration of work and study is highest received 38% and 32% among five reasons. Meanwhile, no reason stated and other demonstrate a relatively lower expenditure behaviors with on significant 7% in both reasons. Finally, the reason is accompany family is 16% and highest second after work and study.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-03-29 | Trần Ánh Vy | 67 | view |
- The maps illustrate the centre in small town build and planned development Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability Others believe that there are more important factors Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The table below shows population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050 Population million Countries 2003 2025 2050 Argentina 34 48 62 Indonesia 238 274 312 Italy 54 47 45 Republic of Korea 48 52 52 67
- The chart below show information about European people of different age groups who went to gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of year stayed in the UK in 2004 up 2 to 4 years is lowest among three ti...
^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antly increased when from 5000 to 100000 2 to 4 years. By contrast, the length of...
^^
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accompanied'.
Suggestion: accompanied
...in both reasons. Finally, the reason is accompany family is 16% and highest second after ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64444444444 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6974299611 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8271889201 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404013262952 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168189756101 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129343838626 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258771056621 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132189703759 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of year stayed in the UK in 2004 up 2 to 4 years is lowest among three ti...
^^
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antly increased when from 5000 to 100000 2 to 4 years. By contrast, the length of...
^^
Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'accompanied'.
Suggestion: accompanied
...in both reasons. Finally, the reason is accompany family is 16% and highest second after ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64444444444 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6974299611 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8271889201 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404013262952 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168189756101 0.103423049105 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129343838626 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258771056621 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132189703759 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.