Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned
in the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis and metros are advised. To what extent
do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage
Occasions on which private vehicles are not allowed to be driven within the central city
for specific days are encouraged in some metropolitan areas. Therefore, people are stimulated
to utilize public transportation. I consider its benefits such as reduced traffic congestion and a
decrease in the release of carbon into the atmosphere are slightly more significant although this
practice can induce inconvenience to residents.
The first benefit of banning individual means of transportation on certain days is that it can lessen
traffic congestion. With fewer cars and motorbikes on the road, traffic jams can be eased and
travel time for public transportation can be reduced. For instance, the annual "World Car-Free
Day" that takes place on September 22nd each year encourages people to use alternative forms
of transportation instead of driving their cars, leading to a significant reduction in traffic density
worldwide.
Another advantage is the reduction in carbon emissions. As vehicles are a major source of air
pollution, limiting or banning them on certain days can significantly lessen the levels of
pollutants such as nitrogen oxides and particulate matter in the air. This can lead to improved air
quality and better health outcomes, especially for people with respiratory issues.
However, as private vehicles are prohibited on certain days, it can cause inconvenience for
citizens. More specifically, people who live or work in the city center may find it burdensome to
have to use public transportation or walk long distances to get to their destination in lieu of
utilizing their own cars or motorbikes.
In conclusion, although transport-free days may trigger inconvenience for residents, I consider
its advantages including the improvement of traffic congestion and lowering of carbon footprint
are far more noteworthy since it has positive impacts on the wider population. It is advisable that
individuals should follow this practice to improve air quality and their own health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63754045307 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19751254375 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7516756116 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173541217032 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619195447025 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431212736252 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480444352703 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376913533441 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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