The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summariez the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features
The diagram illustrates the working of a hot air balloon.
Overall, it is clear that the envelope is the largest part of the total area. In addition, the diagram
indicates that propane is the fuel that is used to produce the hot air.
At the base of the hot air balloon, a propane cylinder is located in the basket. The propane then
mixes with air in the burner, producing a flame to heat the air. Next, the hot air rises inside the
envelope, causing the balloon to rise from the ground, because the hot air is lighter than the cool air
in the surrounding atmosphere. Ropes are shown securing the basket section to the skirt of the
envelope.
In addition to the skirt at the base of the envelope, gores and panels also form part of the envelope
section. A parachute valve at the top of the envelope is a self-sealing flap. This allows the pilot of
the balloon to control the rate at which the hot air can escape.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50588235294 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37241937743 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3448512931 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107299879528 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534336453324 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659893326735 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056543552556 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635958737023 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.