In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation?
It’s perceived by many that in some nations, having own home than renting one is extremely crucial for people. This essay will explain why this happens. From my point of view, I reckon this is positive situation.
To begin with, I would like to explain why having a house or an apartment is so vital for some people. This is because they have a strong belief that they just can live well only if they have their own home. Indeed, if they rent accommodation, they will have to worry about if the host will continue sign a contract with them to allow them to stay in a house or if the host will raise the renting fee. This will lead to the fact that they find hard to concentrate on something else such as their careers. For example, if a worker rent a flat by paying fee every month. The owner of the flat wants to raise fee. Then, the worker has to worry about living expense because he might not afford for renting the flat anymore and he has to move out. Consequently, he spends much time on finding new place and it’s hard for him to concentrate on his work. As a result, his working performance will be impacted significantly. The another reason which also need to be considered is that in some countries, renting fees sometime exceed the amount of money which they pay for a bank per month in case they get a housing loan from a bank. This is reality in some European country such as Netherlands.
On the other hand, renting a house has some benefits. First of all, when you live in house which is leased by an owner, you can move all whenever you want. Moreover, in some countries, people pay less money for renting home than purchasing a house. Indeed, some people have to work all life but still cannot afford for buying a house like citizens in Ho Chi Minh city, Vietnam. In my opinion, buying an accommodation is a good trend because I believe that everyone likes having their own place. Indeed, if I had a house, I would be absolutely happy because I owned the house. It means I have an asset and I can decorate the house with the way which I want.
In conclusion, owing a home than paying rent fee is so pivotal for people in some countries because they can focus on developing their careers without worrying about not having home to stay if the host does not want to sign a contract with them anymore. In addition, I suppose having a house or a flat is good situation because people can enjoy their life in their own places such as decorating house as they wish.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...nh city, Vietnam. In my opinion, buying an accommodation is a good trend because I believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, well, as to, for example, i reckon, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39177489177 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34503906646 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463203463203 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8026965571 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2173913043 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0869565217 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.60869565217 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256395780014 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828446670099 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638467991924 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187382885003 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696388928805 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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