Despite its downtown location, the Rialto Movie Theater, a local institution for five decades, must make big changes or close its doors forever. It should follow the example of the new Apex Theater in the mall outside of town. When the Apex opened last year, it featured a video arcade, plush carpeting and seats, and a state-of-the-art sound system. Furthermore, in a recent survey, over 85 percent of respondents reported that the high price of newly released movies prevents them from going to the movies more than five times per year. Thus, if the Rialto intends to hold on to its share of a decreasing pool of moviegoers, it must offer the same features as Apex
The argument that if Rialto Movie Theatre want to experience decrease moviegoers, it should have the same features as Apex Movie Theatre is not entirely logically convincing.
The argument made an assumption that 85 percent of the respondents of high price of new released movies prevent them from going to movies more than five times a year and so Rialto should do what Apex is doing. This assumption is misleading since the location of Apex movie Theatre and Rialto Movie Theatre are not mentioned. Even if they operate in the same locality, people might have their own taste and not necessarily because Rialto Theatre is not having some features as Apex.
Moreover, the assumption failed to address that high price of new released movies might be caused by other factors. The cost of producing a movie have an indirect cost on the price of every movie. Moving on, the survey omit how the 85 percent was obtained. Generalizing the result of just a survey of a group of people can be misleading. More to the point, the survey did not point out the number of respondent since it is very necessary before a result of a survey can be generalized to represent the entire population.
Furthermore, a movie theatre 5 decades ago cannot be used to compare a movie theatre which was established two years ago. The experience level of the people will also vary and so each will have ways of producing movies. Adding to this, the people living in the locality might not have taste for movies and so their taste can not be used to say it is the non-performance of a theatre.
Thus, it is clear that Apex movie theatre and Rialto movie theatre might be two different theatres and the performance of one can not be used to judge the other. There should be more and deep research to know more and the author should provide more details to back his argument.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 327 350
No. of Characters: 1492 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.252 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.563 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.467 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 43 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.779 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.372 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 327.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67889908257 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53912883258 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480122324159 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 705.55239521 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6710842207 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.70786347227 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142350611901 0.218282227539 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553858497596 0.0743258471296 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500215439249 0.0701772020484 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945947809042 0.128457276422 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513979242379 0.0628817314937 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.5979740519 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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