Shopping is the favourite pastime for most young people. Why do you think it is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do other activities?
Considering leisure activities, nowadays younger generations prefer to go shopping instead of other activities. There are numerous reasons for this situation, and in my opinion, young people ought to engage themselves in more innovative and recreational activities.
To begin with, the most prominent reason why this situation happens is because of advertising. By this, I mean that most people see a different advertisement that not only lures the population towards that product but also gives them some amount of addiction to check it out when they find some free time. Moreover, online shopping also has the issue of attracting more people to buy any product at the cheapest price. For example, the website of Amazon.com offers people the ability to buy products at an affordable price because it does not involve any sub-agent between the consumer and seller; therefore, people can easily buy what they desire.
Examining the remedies for people to be more curious about other activities is to spread awareness among them so they can divert themselves to do more productive work. This is to say that the government promotes sports activities by making various arenas in any particular local area, giving the people enthusiasm to go and play at that place. To add to this, some funds also encourage people to do more work in their field, which gives them more relaxation and encourages them to engage in their field.
To recapitulate, although there are various reasons, such as advertising such products and the cheapest version available in the market, my argument is that raising awareness and providing some special infrastructure for people to help them flourish is an appropriate way to deal with the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, i mean, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20430107527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80024444368 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587813620072 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9736381784 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.2 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18848250743 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074298217154 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471740764377 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100762419167 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551708607623 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.