Some people think environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree disagree?
In recent years, environmental protection is the current topic in society. Some people think it is the duty of governments, not of individuals. In my opinion, I partly agree with this statement.
First and foremost, the responsibility for environmental protection largely belongs to the state administrations. Because, those in power are nominated and have income from the people. So they need to have the responsibility to preserve the lives of the people, they have to make policies on the economy, education, society, ... and also on the environment. If the environment is affected, it will endanger the health of the people and the nature of the country.
On the other hand, each ordinary people also contributes significantly to protecting the environment today. Because in a country, the number of people living is very large, creating a huge impact on the environment. For example, each participant joins hands to turn off the electricity on "Earth Hour". That energy saving can build a common power transmission for people to use for a whole month. Or, restricting the participation and use of means of transport by the population can greatly reduce environmental pollution.
In conclusion, environmental protection is an urgent and hot issue of society that every individual and unit has the responsibility to implement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36018957346 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38216099468 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4119686888 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7857142857 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214657212753 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698753243909 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490815895089 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132306094102 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036355498331 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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