Some parents believe that schools and the government should be responsible for transporting children to and from school. Others think it is the parents' responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the modes of transportation being unsafe by the day, the responsibility of transporting students to and fro from school has been an issue often dividing opinions, as some people argue the schools and government should bear the responsibility, while others think parents are the ones to be responsible. I believe that, both the sides have a proper standing, and depend on the perspective we view the issue upon, which are expressed in the impending paragraphs.
The schools providing assistance to transport the children aids parents with busy schedule while ensuring their child’s safety. With radip urbanization, people nowadays are leading a much busier life, thus, having to alter their schedule just to drop their children to and from their school would not be a possibility for most parents. A recent survey by Apple shows, the main reason for employees being late was due to the parents needing to drop their children in the time of heavy traffic. Moreover, with schools providing school buses can ensure the safety of the children from the moment the children leave their homes.
Meanwhile, parents taking the responsibility for transportation will ensure flexible timing as well as reduces the financial burden for the government. As every family have a different morning ritual, some taking more time than others to be ready for school, if school bus is to be used would be disrupted as both the students as well as their parents have to move along the bus schedule, which can not be a possibility for most. In the mean time, as the schooling system nowadays are hugely underfunded, taking additional responsibility for student’s transportation adds a financial burden to the government, which can be alleviated by the parents stepping-in. The plunge in Nepal’s GDP in the year after school took the transportation responsibility perfrctly exemplifies the burden imposed in the government.
Weighing both sides of the argument, I believe that parents, though having a plethora of issues with time and scheduling shound undertake their responsibility for taking their childern to school, as the financial burdens to the school system outweights those problems. Meanwhile, somre private companies like lyft, uber, et cetera can assist parents with busier schedule in the matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29427792916 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96709351894 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506811989101 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7240428827 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.916666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5833333333 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422620310589 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166733123143 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081710158194 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266332531147 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772425252849 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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