Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time.This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Adults are the nation builders of every country.Few individuals believe that adults should give their leisure time to do society work for which no money paid to them.They think that this will be beneficial for both youth and the group of people.I agree with this ststement to some extent and i will discuss it in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with,people should motivate teenagers to take part in social work.If they do so then,this is useful for them and for the societies club,they get to know about the current condition of the societies and if there are some issues ar any kind of problem related to a particular field they can think about it and can try to solve the problem.In this way the power of taking decisions and to tackle the problem is developed in the adults.Another thing is that adults are the major part of the societies and it is their right and duty to work for their communities and strenghten the social groups.In addition to it,it is the moral duty of the teenagers to work for the group of people for free because it is a social work and no one can get salary for any type of social meetings.
On the other hand,although it is a good idea that adults should give their hand to participate in social gatherungs but tere are some other aspects as well on which they teenagers have to be focused and concentrated for example studies,career,job opportunities and family.Due to their busy schedule it is not appropriate to leave their studies and do some kind of social work because education and career is far more important than the social events.In this modern era,everybody want to work for which they can get salary.
In conclusion,it is the moral duty and ethics to do some work for the communities to help them without expecting maoney from these associations.However teenagers should also pay attention to their studies because education is must to achieve a lucrative job opportunities and ti seek for a profession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, another thing, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80473372781 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92003890709 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48224852071 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.172448598 49.4020404114 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 406.0 106.682146367 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.5 20.7667163134 407% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286239473464 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183944612878 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00824928942204 0.0667982634062 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183944612878 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00824928942204 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.4 13.0946893788 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.32 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 11.3001002004 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Few
...re the nation builders of every country.Few individuals believe that adults should ...
^^^
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ty work for which no money paid to them.They think that this will be beneficial for ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... for both youth and the group of people.I agree with this ststement to some exten...
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Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... with this ststement to some extent and i will discuss it in the upcoming paragra...
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Suggestion: , people
...upcoming paragraphs. To commence with,people should motivate teenagers to take part ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...e teenagers to take part in social work.If they do so then,this is useful for them...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...e part in social work.If they do so then,this is useful for them and for the societie...
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Suggestion: , they
...eful for them and for the societies club,they get to know about the current condition...
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Suggestion: In
...out it and can try to solve the problem.In this way the power of taking decisions ...
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Suggestion: Another
... the problem is developed in the adults.Another thing is that adults are the major part...
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Line 3, column 604, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: In
...nities and strenghten the social groups.In addition to it,it is the moral duty of ...
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...hten the social groups.In addition to it,it is the moral duty of the teenagers to w...
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...of social meetings. On the other hand,although it is a good idea that adults should gi...
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Suggestion: , career
...sed and concentrated for example studies,career,job opportunities and family.Due to the...
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...ies,career,job opportunities and family.Due to their busy schedule it is not approp...
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...r more important than the social events.In this modern era,everybody want to work ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , everybody
...han the social events.In this modern era,everybody want to work for which they can get sal...
^^^^^^^^^^
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Suggestion: , it
...ch they can get salary. In conclusion,it is the moral duty and ethics to do some...
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Suggestion: However
...xpecting maoney from these associations.However teenagers should also pay attention to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...xpecting maoney from these associations.However teenagers should also pay attention to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...n to their studies because education is must to achieve a lucrative job opportunities a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, another thing, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80473372781 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92003890709 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48224852071 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.172448598 49.4020404114 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 406.0 106.682146367 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.5 20.7667163134 407% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286239473464 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183944612878 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00824928942204 0.0667982634062 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183944612878 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00824928942204 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.4 13.0946893788 331% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.32 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 11.3001002004 309% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.