There have been major advances in technology over recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technological developments which have been there bringing many changes in this world, and it gives big impact to all sectors in order to humans can improve their lives. While there are a lot of disadvantages causing chaos such as misappropriation, people also can utilize it for many things especially about science.
One reason why technology causing significant advantage to people is utilizing science for industry. Researchers have done various experiment and research about how to solve problem efficiently. For instance, we knew that it was impossible to fly in the sky for visiting other people from distant, but after plane was developed, it is normal situation for going faraway quickly. Everyone cannot refuse this condition because we need to make easier everything in our live through science which has been developed.
In addition, technology has been changed and encourage humans to create new habit nowadays. They grow to be individual who can be multitasking and fast to response everything in their live. For example, since online meeting from internet platforms were created, we are able to be connect with everyone in this world and make a business without having to meet face to face. It is the way never we thought before.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that technological developments can bring sustain benefits for people’s live. The thing will be happened in the future as long as many people do that, so they would establish new various innovations being able to accommodate their needs. Therefore, we need to know these developments are important to provide many things in all sectors of live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21673003802 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88826758879 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0054116792 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16124151801 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583137462533 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403900235567 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100033051447 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015426874965 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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