Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?
Nowadays the number of people who do travelling is accounted increasing than activity having been happened in the past. While this phenomenon has some causes, I thing it is ultimately a great thing as everyone need to visit many places in this world, even though they have work to do in the busy day. This essay would to examine about the topic with various perspectives.
Travellers go far visiting a lot of destinations because they sometimes want to spend their time on holiday to get enjoyable moment with others and to be fun after doing job during workdays. In modern era, we face many pressures almost every time when having to completing complicated work. For instance, after working 5 days in office, I decided to make a plan on weekend to hike mountain to enjoy the beautiful view of nature. We can arrange time based on our activities to determine where we will go and for the next.
For sure, there is positive impact when someone travel to some places. They can come to memorable place, tourism attraction, or nature. It is a good way which can be done to reduce stress, since life without holiday to outside would be boring. Traveling to those places are great method for people relaxing. For example, we must want to take time to go outside when we are studying in school, because it makes us stress, so going to some places to get good mood is a good way. Therefore, more and more complicated problems which is had by people, they need to get new situation to rest in another place.
In conclusion, people would rather travelling than other activities when they have holiday because it is amazing way to be fun. Although everyone just has few days to visit many destinations, they can be that as means to see various beautiful view in this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...hile this phenomenon has some causes, I thing it is ultimately a great thing as every...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'travel'
Suggestion: travel
.... In conclusion, people would rather travelling than other activities when they have ho...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66773162939 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51227934958 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0077770218 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182655472215 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726163809944 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774518861438 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119455481987 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308982297304 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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