Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
Government may have some options to control issues about traffic and pollution, and one of the methods is altering the price of petrol to be high. Although this way may be effective in order to petrol consumption is limited because only certain people who can purchase it, there are other people need to get it and having necessity, but is not able to get expensive.
On the society side, increasing the price can make people to think twice before buying petrol as energy source for doing activities, as result they have to be thrifty how to optimize work without depending on the energy, while it can give effect to other things such as basic needs, public transportation, etc becoming pricey. In addition, there is no guarantee that it will be success because in fact problem about traffic and pollution remain as before.
To solve the problems, there are some alternatives which focus to reduce the impact of pollution and traffic than appending new issue like increasing the price. Nowadays some environment communities have attempted to offer a program about using bicycle as transportation to go work in office. This way has got many public exposures because they can hire influencer for joining the trend. In the other hand, government may be able to help to provide special track in order to people more and more be often to do the new habit. With this method, there is no discrimination for people and one who need petrol as energy of activity is not burdened.
Any methods may have advantages or disadvantages to apply for society as new policy, however government must consider about what people need and the impact after assembling the way. The best thing that it is not be more difficulty and making new issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... the way. The best thing that it is not be more difficulty and making new issues. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86486486486 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62790935856 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9825922448 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212666306246 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770758781588 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432668860854 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131400747748 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034802388538 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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