Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Financially better and having less free time is far better than not having great amount of money and plentiful time. In my opinion, there are number of benefits having large amount of money compared to financially less capable. This essay will discuss both the perspectives below.
Rich people always have more productive day and less stressful life. To explain that people with higher wealth have multiple businesses so they spend their useful time building career and expanding the businesses. As a result, they have less time throughout the day which is quite reasonable as they are busy. This allow them to stay productive whole day and not feeing any stress for being available. Moreover, due to higher wealth, they can live luxurious lifestyle as they do not have to think about the expense of the product.
In addition, having more wealth makes people more busy resulting into less availability. Because of that they need to create a schedule for a day. Even they have to arrange meeting time for their family to have dinner and lunch with them.
Contrary, low income and more free time make person depressive. If people seat without an employment, they can easily fall into stress and depression. As they are always worried about the salary, they need to feed the family and utilize of the money to survive with that saving. Moreover, because less earning is not enough for the whole family, every member of the family has to work for time being.
To conclude, there are numerous benefits of being financial capable and busy life. However, less income and leisure time make people sick and worried. Therefore, I believe advantages of being wealthy outweigh the low income and more free time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97909407666 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35938676798 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7866364089 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9444444444 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410458259038 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132426162358 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120941779636 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248436976974 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115078388125 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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