Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays more and more tourists tried to travel to challenging places where difficulty is one of interest thing like Sahara Desert or Antarctic. It is not all people can visit as to go need more preparation and considering about safety. However, what they will obtain is worth.
On the plus side, extreme places bring a good impression by travellers because need to have big struggle for reaching it. The destination become a special moment where they can get rare scenery and involve in adventure, as if only once for life can come to take the experience. Through the story after travelling, one can post how to be success doing the trip and beneficials then public attention can be get, it will make famous on social media.
Regarding the problem which may be happened along travelling, there are possibilities that any difficulties such as bad weather and predators disturb the trip. For serious issue, their life may be in danger because of the situation, although preparation to go is sufficient, climate may be going to alter from time to time. The illustration that whoever would be terrified when hiking to Everest Mountain as there are many graves of mountaineers, as the result of extreme weather. Especially for new travellers, they must be ready about material and physical ability before going there.
Visiting dangerous areas have positive sides and disadvantages which are faced by tourists like the view of summit mountain, arctic temperature, and seeing unique animals. In the other hand, everyone has to be careful with the condition as it can be damage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: struggled
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with the condition as it can be damage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, then, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04580152672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75458308785 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6901191174 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190693593223 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066077964048 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785095763706 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125747730635 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106235702527 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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