Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern technology era, children now are facing an urgent lifestyle that points out the responsibility of parents and schools. I partly agree with this statement, children should also recognize their obligation in this matter, indeed.
On the one hand, family and parents should take the highest role in shaping their offspring' habits. During infancy, children's cognitive skills are based on their parents' education and the ways they think are affected most by their parents, also family is the safest place for children to live and be civilized. For instance, many modern parents can limit their kids' bad lifestyle by spending more time gathering family bonds, giving them household, limiting screen time and providing a balanced diet.
On the other hand, I agree that schools also have a duty to decrease the rapid development of this issue, since schools refer to the "second homes" for kids and teenagers. Studies have proved that at schools, children can change their habits and gain more knowledge more easily, especially when they accompany a group of friends. For that reason, teachers can organize more physical activities and divide pupils into smaller groups to promote them a safe environment to study.
Although schools and parents can provide the best conditions for children to change their unhealthy lifestyle, it is essentially that children themselves can recognize how important this matter is. By obtaining enough education and efforts from schools and family, children can make their own decision whether they want to change or not. To change their destroyed lifestyle, children must push themselves to close all of the chance for increasing unbalanced living style. They must have a healthy diet, do more exercises and always be self-discipline.
In conclusion, to succeed in changing our future generations into the better version, we have to take a look on what we have gone through to find out the best solutions. Each piece in this social plays an important role in changing the children's unhealthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 415, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... children must push themselves to close all of the chance for increasing unbalanced living...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29268292683 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68945989505 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2308708097 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254474752747 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905480948028 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465382684061 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146201218215 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406728336217 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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