At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large
number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The average age of the population for many nations around the world has been in
decline in recent decades creating a situation where young people have become
the world’s largest demographic, particularly in developing nations. Although
there are decided drawbacks to this phenomenon related to expertise in the
workforce, it is still a positive development because it will lead to booming
economies in the coming years.
The most frequently cited drawback to having a predominately young population
is the lack of skilled workers in many important industries. A great example of this
can be seen in Vietnam, which has one of the youngest populations in the world.
Vietnam currently has very few leaders in important areas like engineering and
technology. When it came time for Ho Chi Minh city to build a subway system,
there were not enough skilled engineers to accomplish the feat. They had to hire
a huge number of specialists from Japan and Thailand to ensure the quality of the
project. The potential engineers for this project are still in school in Vietnam or
studying abroad and it may be another decade before they are ready to design
and execute large, complex infrastructure. It is not uncommon for developing
countries with young populations to require outside assistance for national
projects to the detriment of their own workers.
Despite this drawback, the advantage of a young population is that it brings many
future benefits to a country and is a key indicator of future economic prosperity.
Japan famously has one of the oldest populations in the world and this has led
them into a deep economic recession over the last 20 years as it becomes
increasingly apparent that the nation will have to assume responsibilities related
to healthcare and a dwindling workforce. Contrast this with the so-called ‘Tiger
Economies’ of Southeast Asia that include Thailand, Vietnam, Indonesia and
Singapore. These countries have some of the youngest populations in the world,
which, coupled with a growing middle class and better education, means that
they will enjoy upward economic growth for decades to come. The middle class
will expand because well-educated graduates will be able to get good jobs and
this middle class will become a consumer class that feeds the economy. Overall,
this is why having a young population is desirable for any nation.
In conclusion, I fully believe that a younger population indicates a country is going
to be successful in the future. The key element for all young populations is
education and governments should focus on this in order to fully exploit the
benefits of their demographic.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 67
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, still, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28372093023 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90597564157 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541860465116 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2891929638 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.647058824 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2941176471 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.38176352705 799% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201200577657 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650695188904 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343672533929 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045848203931 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470659745119 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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