Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Knowledge is the power and tool to drive one through the hurdles and accomplish the heights of success. This Wisdom, though can never be a force driven into ones conscience. I clearly agree that learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline and students cannot be motivated by schools or colleges alone to grasp what is important.
There are numerous luminaries from the history who have been an epitome of self discipline, of self structuring and attaining plethora of fame. In Indian mythology, Arjun from the epic Mahabharata was never forced and motivated by his guru to learn Dhanur Vidhya but he practised it laboriously and became the best Dhaunr Dhar till date. Similarly no teacher was ready to teach Karn Dhanur Vidhya and the art of war but he self motivatedly achieved everything and became as vibrant as Arjun.
None of us would have imagined a world without light and bulb, had it not been sir Edison to invent bulb. But Edison was never forced to study rather he was demotivated and chastised by his school faculty for being dumb. It was his own power and curious nature and discipline towards study which led him for his record breaking invention.
All of these discoveries and record breaking inventions by venerated scientist presents to us a picture that how self discipline and awareness towards the goal and not always motivation from schools and colleges, can led to success and better understanding.
ISRO is ready to launch its Chandrayaan 3, but no one is talking about how was its first rocket launched by Dr APJ Abdul Kalam. No support, no motivation, its first rocket was carried on a bicycle, assembled in ground and launched from a village, but the dedication and personal discipline of the scientist and their awareness towards themselves and their nation led them cross milestones one after another.
So its not always the thousand lectures and motivational speeches that could led anyone to attain wisdom and learning, but its self discipline that plays a significant role.
Seemingly one also cannot deny the fact that to a drowning ship even a boat could be of significant help, that is, at stages when one is stuck in a dubious situation then help from the intellectuals and their motivation always comes to rescue, like was the case of Arjun during the Mahabharata, when he was stuck in his thoughts, Krishna came to his rescue and motivated his to take action
Eventually a disciplined personal attitude can be an additional boon for learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, similarly, so, then, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93586698337 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72082148242 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553444180523 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.542319992 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.428571429 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0714285714 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149884737436 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059063815894 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948909618732 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770722210554 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653145314509 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.