The table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses

Essay topics:

The table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses

The given table compares the population of three areas of a city and types of housing such as Flat, Terraced, Semi-detached and Detached in which people prefer to live.

Overall, It is clear from the graph that despite the population of the three areas being very similar, there is a considerable difference in the choice of housing.

All three areas have a population of about 32000. In the green park area of city individuals, living/ flats are the most popular, and the ratio is amounting to more than 70%, which is three-time of South berg area and 60% more than Central area. Coming to a terraced house, 56% of the Southern area population like to live in terraced houses, but only 14% and 18% of people of Green Park area and Central area live in these types of homes, respectively.

Moreover, in the green park area, people live in semi-detached and detached types of houses, rates are equal, accounting for 5% each. Only 5% of the Southern area population live in semi-detached homes that are about 10% less than the proportion that lives in detached houses. In the Central part of a city, the people live house ratio is highest, it is 39 % which is 11% more than the proportion of people that live in semi-detached houses.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64780639661 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465437788018 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3622571639 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.875 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112368621689 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677541133408 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569755592531 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941955919097 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652589981995 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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