Directors of large organisations earn higher Salaries than ordinary employees do. Some people think it is necessary, but others are Of the Opinion that it is unfair. Discuss both Views and give your opinions."
Senior manager of huge enterprises earn handsome amount of money as compared to normal workers of that industry. Although it is believed by major strata of Sociey that it is mandatory, others Opine that it is inequitable. This essay intends to analyze both viewpoints,I, however Stand with former thought.
Admittedly, one of the prime reasons behind such exponential growth could be responsibility. This is due to the fact that, manager hold significant liability for the performance and company's overall strategic decisions. To illustrate in a better way, an article published in The forbes in 2022 Showed that around 90%of sell of tata motors only because of incredible decision and marketing strategy of senior manager Ajit patil. probing Further, market demand is another reason as market for qualified managers is very Competitive so company Offers high wage to Secure the best individual for their Company. Therefore, if companies provides higher Incentive to the directors, they Stay longer in the industries which will be fruitful for any organization as they have higher experience.
Despite inumerable reasons to support this topic, its negative downsides cannot be overlooked. Offering competitive salaries not only benefits employees but also Company, it foster the loyalty and employees work with more motivation in order to fulfill the daily target and achieve compan's moto. To put out a convincing example, a Study Carried out by cap breton university in canada suggest that workers perform more effectively when they rewarded by higher incentives.
my opinion, it is advantageous for Company to pay higher remuneration to senior manager as they have enough experience and ability to take excellent dicision for Compan's growth
In Conclusion, even though, it is benifical in terms to motivate employees for higher productivity, I deem that manager had obligation to take advantageous choice for Organization's growth.
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Suggestion: Probing
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Message: Did you mean 'fosters'?
Suggestion: fosters
...benefits employees but also Company, it foster the loyalty and employees work with mor...
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...they rewarded by higher incentives. my opinion, it is advantageous for Company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51839464883 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96131514146 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655518394649 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8232594041 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0787486735139 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247768258303 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024752592564 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485547304536 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169491547217 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.85 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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