Admission to art galleries or museums should be free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether should museums and galleries offer free entrance has been a heated debate in the recent years. While strong support for this idea exists on the ground, however, there are others, who fiercely condemn it since their own reasons. In this essay, I will demonstrate both perspectives and then give my opinion on the matter.
On the one hand, the preliminary reason why admission fee for museums should not be free is that they need to have steady income to cover its cost. Museums or galleries have the same obligation as other enterprises to enforce the government’s policies namely: taxes payment, insurance, payroll, … Therefore, the money that collected by entry fee is using to pay for all the demands and requirements to continue and maintain the museum.
On the other hand, there are numerous reasons why free entrance is supported. Initially, not only free charge can boost the feeling of pride in younger generation but it also raise the feeling of national unity and identity. To be more specific, museums display various valuable historical items, collections which can characterize the ways of communication and working of indigenous in the past. It gives us a depth understanding of how arduous and strenuous the past life is so that we can fully comprehend the sacrifice of our ancestors. Hence, we can inherit and devote to the development and nourish our nation.
All things considered, while some people argue for the charge requirements, other advocate for the free entrance museum admission. I believe that in order to have enriching and enlightening experience, museums should offer a discount to promote and attract prospective customers.
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Message: Did you mean 'raises'?
Suggestion: raises
...pride in younger generation but it also raise the feeling of national unity and ident...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18081180812 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85141736871 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8195904764 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221995109123 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735303210994 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678155197919 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127892947244 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381677450957 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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