The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.
The given chart illustrates the data of how many volunteers and paid workers in four distinct roles in the sports sector of a town located in Australia in 2015.
In general, the data suggests the figure for volunteers in coaching had the highest number, while in referees had the lowest. In addition, the number of individuals who were paid in other sections was the highest figure, while it was the lowest for referees.
To be more specific, the number of individuals who joined in the sports sector as volunteers in coaching witnessed the highest with around 73, while it was recorded the lowest with apporximately 31 people in the same role. There were 69 people who were interested in other sections, which took the second place on the chart. The therapist role took the third place with 54.
Furthermore, compared with the other three roles in the sports sector, those people who decided to take part in other sections as paid workers had the highest number with 43. Meanwhile, there were minimal changes that were recorded in coaching and therapists, with 3 and 7 people lower than other sections’ number. Similarly, the number of individuals joining referees witnessed the following trend, despite having the fewest people, the number was not much lower than other sections, with 39.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...d workers in four distinct roles in the sports sector of a town located in Australia i...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...number of individuals who joined in the sports sector as volunteers in coaching witnes...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...pared with the other three roles in the sports sector, those people who decided to tak...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, similarly, third, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54121456277 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493087557604 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0814896394 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226973739841 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108273067347 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100762356776 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175967107271 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110152910195 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.