The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given chart compares the amount of Australian men and women who regularly did exercise from 6 distinct age groups in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the proportions for men in all cases were higher than for women, except for the 15-24 age group, which possessed the highest percentage of women exercising. Meanwhile, that of men belonged to the 45-54 group.
In terms of the first 3 groups, the figure for women who were 15 to 24 years old stood at the peak, at 52.8%, then dropped by over 10% when they turned 35. By contrast, boys who turned 35 years old, tended to do exercises more frequently. This meant the percentage of males witnessed a growth, from 47.7% to the second highest point, at 52.5% to be more specific.
Regarding the remaining features, men from the 45-54 group, whose figure was 53.3%, were inclined to take part in physical activities more than all other groups. While this proportion noticeably decreased to 47.1% when males surveyed were 65 or older, the amount of women of the same age group partaking in exercises gradually climbed to approximately 47%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...proportion noticeably decreased to 47.1% when males surveyed were 65 or older, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, then, while, except for, in all cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8670212766 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51826173099 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0298815988 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282027837982 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126640667061 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124134648382 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204045172229 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141663799934 0.0819641961636 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.