The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The young generation is the future of tomorrow.They are the ones who will lead us and our country towards a brighter future.This is why it is very important to prepare them appropriately at a young age and make them realise of their responsibility towards their parents and their nation.Raising them right will enable not just a brighter future but also a happier today because of the satisfaction of things going in the right direction.Everyone tries to raise their children right according to their own standards and this results is ga between the value inculcated in them.I strongly believe that in order to create a better tomorrow it is exteremy crucial to inculcate a sense of cooperation in kids rather than competition.
Competition might not always be healthy and often tends to bring out the bad side of people.It makes people to behave in a certain way without considering the feelings of anyone else.It makes people insensitive and irrational.This thought is driven by the ruthless ambition to achieve something better than others and faster than others.Now,don't get me wrong.A little competiton definately doesn't hurt.However,when this "healthy" competition turns into obsession,it becomes uncontrable and goes out of hand.It hurts other people and makes them a hateful person.Eventually,the person will become alone and no one will try to help him because of his previous actions.
A lot of times we come across cases of match fixing or steroid consumed by athletes to win their respective games.This is purely because of their passion to win the game even means cheating their way out of it.They are so scared of losing the game and being humiliated that they resort to unfaithful ways to ensure their victory.No one is their childhool taught them that it is normal to lose a game and that you must learn from you failures,that you must ensure that you give your best and the rest is upto fate.This basic sense of cooperation and understanding is absent in these people and they end up taking the wrong decisions in life.Even if they manage to get away with it,eventually one day they will feel guilty about it but be unable to do anything to improve the situation.
In a corporate world,the sense of competiton will be considered as insubordination and will result in a bad reputation.In this field,reputation plays a very important role since many people many others and people talk.Everyone has heard everyone's names and companies make sure to know more about you before hiring you.At a certain stage,you education qualifications become secondary and the primary criteria become your work ethics.While ruthless ambition might sound very passionate,in a work place it might seem like an unnecessary attitude and will definately not sit well with the higher authorities of the company.Also the most important fact about this field is that once your reputation is tarnished,it is very difficult to restore it back because while people don't always notice your good virtues,they will definately always remember your blunders.
Having said this,there are a few fileds where a little competiton might not hurt,but controlling this competition is very important and at the same time very hard.It is very difficult to control people and their emotions which enought tend to get out of hand.If a system is developed to keep this is check,I'm sure that all and every competition can be put to goos use and evetually benefit us.But util then,I would say that being cooperative instead of competitive is more beneficial in terms of harmony and peace.Cooperation makes us figure out a way to satisfy everyone equally and avoids the holding of grudges.It gives us a solution that is acceptable to all and thus a adequate one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, then, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 84.0 33.0505617978 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3138.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12745098039 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15651596899 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 331.0 215.323595506 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540849673203 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 1005.3 704.065955056 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 122.0 23.0359550562 530% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.972830312 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 627.6 118.986275619 527% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 122.4 23.4991977007 521% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.8 5.21951772744 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 7.80617977528 641% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175642500228 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976074082269 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243942028866 0.0758088955206 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976074082269 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243942028866 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 63.9 14.1392134831 452% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -52.35 48.8420337079 -107% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 7.92365168539 289% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.9 12.1743820225 418% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.56 8.38706741573 162% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 100.480337079 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.8971910112 504% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 50.8 11.2143820225 453% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 51.0 11.7820224719 433% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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