Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered species
Earth is being ruled by Human Beings, Plants and Animals from way long time. Natural Cycle is responsible for balance on earth among animals, plants and human beings. If any one of then becomes extinct, it may create a havoc condition for others. Human being the smartest and intelligent in whole ecosystem its our duty to prevent other species like plants and animals from going extinct. We can learn way more from animals and plants to prevent human from getting extinct. No plants or animals die on their own its human who kills them for need and if excess killing occurs then they get endangered and after sometime they get extinct.
Even we are facing some problems after some animals got extinct like Male White Rhino's got extinct recently in 2022 from African Continent. Scientists from all over the world are trying their best to prevent them by getting extinct by collecting their semen and impregnating Female White Rhinos. White Rhinos are important for African Continent to preserve the ecosystem throughout the continent. They helps in maintaining other animals population from getting skyrocketing which eventually will help human being in countering the other animals from getting too much in population.
Same thing occurred in India with Cheetah which got extinct and Government of India is trying their best prom preventing it by relocating few cheetahs from Africa to India. Which will result in maintaining the ecosystem and pride of whole nation but we can't be successful in doing so. Some of relocated cheetahs started falling ill and later died due to unknown reason's which resulted in failure of efforts by Indian Government. But still Government officials are trying their best to prevent them from dying. Human development requires some kind of resources which are found beneath the earth and for this we have started encroaching their habitat which might the reason for extinction.
Plants are also facing same issue like Red Sandal Wood which in only found in Karnataka State of India. This kind of wood is used to make various items are also referred as premium quality wood in wood and it is only wood which is red in colour. Government has banned from cutting trees while smugglers are only aware of lucrative sum which it gathers but not how important this plant is important for ecosystem. We can create medicines from plants which might be used in treating some disease capable of killing human being in small amount of time. We can learn from animals how to survive in unexpected scenario's, how to defend ourselves from enemies and much more.
Animals and Plants are a part of ecosystem and important for others too. If anyone gets affected others will also feel the same effect. It doesn't matters how much amount is need to prevent the extinction of them its our duty to prevent as we are responsible for their extinctions. I do agree with the first point but not with the second one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...test and intelligent in whole ecosystem its our duty to prevent other species like ...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...cosystem throughout the continent. They helps in maintaining other animals population...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...tinent. They helps in maintaining other animals population from getting skyrocketing wh...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...system and pride of whole nation but we cant be successful in doing so. Some of relo...
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: red
...od in wood and it is only wood which is red in colour. Government has banned from cutting tre...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ecosystem and important for others too. If anyone gets affected others will also f...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hers will also feel the same effect. It doesnt matters how much amount is need to prev...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... need to prevent the extinction of them its our duty to prevent as we are responsib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, then, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41180817893 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468686868687 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3362091313 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132512177316 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468829874761 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420464585192 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810673551926 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293433325318 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.