The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The charts give information on the proportion of individuals from different age ranges and genders in Britain purchasing music albums, including pop, rock and classical music.
Overall, there are more male album purchasers than females in all three genres. While people aged 16 to 44 prefer rock and pop albums, these albums experience the lowest purchasing by the older generation (45+). Listeners above 45 years old mostly buy classical music albums, but the proportion of teenagers buying them is the lowest among all album types.
In terms of gender, men buy more albums than women in every category, but both genders favor rock albums. Considering pop music, men account for nearly 30% whereas women’s proportion is only 20%. A similar gap is repeated in the category of rock music, where men’s percentage surpasses that of women by 10%. Classical music albums attract the least buyers from two genders, respectively nearly 10% for males and just above 5% for females.
Pop and rock music buyers are mostly teenagers (30%), the 25-34 age group ( over 30%) and 35-44 years old listeners (nearly 30%), except for middle-aged music enthusiasts with approximately 10%. Middle-aged listeners comprise 20% of people who buy classical albums; however, that of teenagers falls below 5%. A similar pattern can also be seen in the 35-44 age group, where below 5% of them buy classical-related albums. However, classical music albums still gain 15% of 25-34 years old buyers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ostly teenagers 30%, the 25-34 age group over 30% and 35-44 years old listeners n...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63073531685 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5794042367 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200026309848 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082634785805 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385551587069 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133141098341 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026404293785 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ostly teenagers 30%, the 25-34 age group over 30% and 35-44 years old listeners n...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, thus, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63073531685 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5794042367 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200026309848 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082634785805 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385551587069 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133141098341 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026404293785 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.