Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem.
Nowadays, rejuvenation of criminals is globally growthing in major cities. This situation as a result of various reasons. And it is necessary and challenging to handle this problem. This essay will discuss the causes and the solution for this status.
There are three main reasons that should be mentioned. Firstly, socioeconomic status is a factor in the increase of young crimes. The disparity between rich and poor, lack of accessibility to quality education or less economic opportunities all can lead to the increase of percentage in young crime due to survival. Secondly, family issues can drive the young to participate in criminal activities. In a family, violence, lack of care and education from parents can contribute to a children with no guideline and support. Therefore, this individual may lose direction and easily break the law. Thirdly, using addictive substances in teenagers can bring about the following criminal ways. According to some research, these substances can weaken the mental and physical health of humans. Consequently, the young are willing to commit the crime to satisfy their habits.
To prevent this situation, it is necessary to combine many solutions. The first solution that should be mentioned is education and skill development. Investment in the quality of education and training programs help teenagers to prepare for a career path and build their future. Another solution would be collaboration among family, school and society. Receiving enough care and attention from these parties can help young people realize their mistakes in time to correct and have better perception.
In conclusion, the growth of young crimes in urban areas around the world is a complex problem caused by multiple factors. To address this problem requires a comprehensive approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: handling
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41134751773 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8993997287 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1174442185 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254685456196 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680115235974 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677223656161 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161275190602 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077984447866 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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