Task 2. As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are solutions for these problems?
The development in metropolises in the world nowadays brings about numerous problems for the young who are living there. The essay will discuss these problems and how to deal with them.
There are three challenges that should be mentioned. Firstly, modern young people have to face high living costs. Rapid urbanization can lead to an increase in housing costs and it is hard for the young to afford. Not only do young people pay for house renting, they also have various expenses including meals, vehicles, and personal items. This situation can limit their financial ability to save or invest. Secondly, traffic congestion and transportation issues may contribute to these problems. After long working hours, facing traffic jams can raise stress for young workers. Thirdly, high competition in major cities can be difficult for the young.Big cities concentrate many talented people, which can cause significant stress. And as a result, young people may suffer from mental health such as depression or anxiety.
To tackle the above issues, there are three solutions respectively, and it is essential to collaborate among the government, businesses and individuals. The first solution would be controlling rent policies by authorities that can help renters get better prices. Or sharing a house is a remarkable solution for young people to save rent money. Moreover, expanding public transportation networking, fostering cycling and walking, and upgrading transport infrastructure as a long-term strategy for transportation problems. Finally, businesses should create and promote a balanced working environment, green spaces and accessibility to mental health services for employees to unwind after working. This issue may handle stressful conditions in young workers.
All in all, there are a lot of negative consequences of this status and problems should be taken timely to not make the situation worse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 653, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Big
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51877133106 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92292874464 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62457337884 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.125944157 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281486840347 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775831572033 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630789623348 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162381050879 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830218762695 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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