The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and the plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate how the Islip town at present time and how is going to change in the future through a development plan.
Overall, the shape of the city center will be circular surrounded by a new road. And there will be added new housing and pedestriansonly road
Firstly, Islip town centre will be added to the city in a circular way. There will expand more place for new housing, replace some shops and pork. It will be smaller than before. The development plans will be applied a bus station, car park. A pedestrians-olnly road instead of the main road near these facilities.
Moreover, these new roads will be dual carriage ways. The shops in front of the countryside will be removed and the shopping centre and other facilities will be applied as a give plans. And shops that are front of the main read will remain as it is.
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- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and the plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 78
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and the plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now and the plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded new housing and pedestriansonly road Firstly, Islip town centre will be added...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a circular way" with adverb for "circular"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...p town centre will be added to the city in a circular way. There will expand more place for new ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 689.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59333333333 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61949104471 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4007484946 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854136264556 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041106850698 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419778312026 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067287846026 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537929501969 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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