The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graphs depict the proportion of households apply electrically and the figure of hours does housework in one nation both the year 1920 and 2019.
In general, the whole three electric machines used for housework were the lowest percentage in 2019. The hours did households in 1920 stay at the highest number a week.
Firstly, the diagram demonstrates that Refrigerator was used in 1920 had the lowest proportion, reach 0 percentage, but in 2019 there was a dramatic rise around 100 percentage points. The Vacuum cleaner in 1920 had the figure higher than refrigerator, about 30 points, also it rockets in 2019 as fridge in 2019, about 100 percent. The opposite, in 1920 the washing machine was used the highest point which higher percentage than vacuum cleaner about 10 points, contrast two machines above in 2019, approximately 72 percent, due to it lower than two machines left.
In terms of, the hours people did households in 1920 at the top rates a week, reach 50 points, and thank to three machines above that individuals apply it into housework in 2019, while the hours of doing households is decline significantly, approximately 40 points. Then the figures of time spent cleaning house per week at least hours.
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The diagram below shows how recycled paper is made Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 67
- Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jams How true do you think this statement is What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their car 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, at least, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9854368932 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72009745297 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8406911448 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.375 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201507187467 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992852223013 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050105038461 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147177722241 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467928506469 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.