Should parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children? Do
you agree with this opinion? Support your position with your own study,
experience or observations.
Every child is good when he or she enters the World during birth. But becoming good or bad is solely dependent on the way he is brought up at home. Parents play a crucial role in developing the basic character, attitude and behavior of a child. The following essay describes about how the parents mold a child to a responsible citizen.
Firstly, children imitates what parents do at home. A happy and responsible parents always make a child in a same manner. The other factor that affects children are their external environment out of their home like school where they interact with other kids and teacher on a regular basis. Like minded people mend together. Though when the kids are surrounded by bad environment, the values that are thought at home always sticks with them that prevents them from bad company.
Secondly, some parents misguide their children in a wrong manner by accepting their child even when he goes in a wrong path. Some over pampered child will not develop or build his life and always depends on his parents for all simple matters of life which prevents them to stand on their own to face life's challenges.
For example, some parents encourage their children by giving them high speed vehicles which results in road accidents while driving at younger age.
To conclude, it is always the Parents' responsibility to bring a responsible children whom then becomes a responsible citizens. As per the quote, 'An iron sharpens other iron', it is always parents who inspire their children in either correct or wrong way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a same manner" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...responsible parents always make a child in a same manner. The other factor that affects children...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong manner" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y, some parents misguide their children in a wrong manner by accepting their child even when he g...
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Line 8, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'child'?
Suggestion: child
...s responsibility to bring a responsible children whom then becomes a responsible citizen...
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Line 8, column 118, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'citizen'?
Suggestion: citizen
...hildren whom then becomes a responsible citizens. As per the quote, An iron sharpens oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88212927757 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5087681829 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9884905916 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7142857143 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178780362957 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062863044593 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420452165901 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100635356335 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350984273083 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.