Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behaviour. If sporting events cause antisocial behaviour, can team sports really be good for us?
In this contemporary world, team sports have played a major role in entertaining and engaging most of the people these days and promoting to keep one fit and build character. With this advent of technology, money and popularity, these have become the driving force of some of antisocial behavior among youngsters and spoiled adults. In this essay, both of the views are discussed before arriving to the conclusion.
To begin with, team sports motivates the one to be fit and to develop the attitude and character than any other activity. The players are not only doing their sport job, but also becoming role models for youngsters and fans who are inspired by team activities such as support, planning, strategy playing and intelligence. This not only helps an individual to enjoy the play, but also helps in building those character traits.
On the other hand, there are a lot of factors involved in recent sports such as brands, politics, big players who are mainly controlling the sports these days which have created a havoc and became a business these days. These drastically creates riots among opponent teams and supporters and sometimes even resulted in violence and antisocial behaviors.
Some of these games paved way for gambling and illegal activities such as match fixing among youngsters who want their team to win and pay huge amount for their supporters to win. This have created havocs and politics and some of the innocent people were affected because of these activities.
To conclude, the authorities and sports academy should always implement serious policies and rules against these illegal activities to protect these games and it is always an individual responsibility to have a balanced approach towards any sports or team which is all a game after all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'there is a lot'?
Suggestion: there is a lot
...character traits. On the other hand, there are a lot of factors involved in recent sports su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, after all, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 8.36945812808 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11262798635 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63477249789 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7983238025 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.181818182 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231470254043 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889369065415 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599209672494 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129864032338 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470431705375 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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