The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table details information about the percentage of two distinctive age brackets, average wages of each individual and population living below the poverty line in three states in the USA.
Overall, it is readily apparent that there are more young individuals in Utah, while those over 60 in poverty are more common in California and especially Florida. Average incomes are generally highest in California and Florida and the largest proportion of total residents in poverty is highest in California, followed by Florida, and lastly Utah.
Concerning the proportion of people in two age groups living in three different states, 28% of teenagers under 18 lives in Utal and the gap between proportion of people under 18 residing in California and Florida is not significant with the respective figure being 17% and 16%. By contrast, the percentage of American aged over 60 in Utal is recorded at only 8% compared to 23% of over 60 years-old people in Florida which is double the figure of people under 18 living Florida and California makes up 13% of American in the over 60-year-old bracket.
Regarding the average income per person, California is the state with the highest average wage earned by each individual accounting for 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal (17,000$). Although the average income of each person in California and Florida is higher than Utal, its population below poverty line accounts for 16% and 12% correspondingly, whereas only 9% of American in Utal lives in underprivileged status
Concerning the proportion of people in two age groups living in three different states, 28% of teenagers under 18 lives in Utal and the gap between proportion of people under 18 residing in California and Florida is not significant with the respective figure being 17% and 16%. By contrast, the percentage of American aged over 60 in Utal is recorded at only 8% compared to 23% of over 60 years-old people in Florida which is double the figure of people under 18 living Florida and California makes up 13% of American in the over 60-year-old bracket.
Regarding the average income per person, California is the state with the highest average wage earned by each individual accounting for 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal (17,000$). Although the average income of each person in California and Florida is higher than Utal, its population below poverty line accounts for 16% and 12% correspondingly, whereas only 9% of American in Utal lives in underprivileged status.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ed by each individual accounting for 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and l...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...or 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal 17,000$. Although the a...
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Line 6, column 198, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal 17,000$. Although the average income of each pe...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ed by each individual accounting for 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and l...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...or 23,000$, followed by Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal 17,000$. Although the a...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...Florida with 22,000$ and lastly Utal 17,000$. Although the average income of each pe...
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Line 9, column 438, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Utal lives in underprivileged status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 91.0 33.7804878049 269% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2126.0 965.302439024 220% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 414.0 196.424390244 211% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13526570048 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 3.73543355544 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84142581635 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.306763285024 0.547539520022 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 283.868780488 239% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4905754512 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.6 112.824112599 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.4 22.9334400587 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16571910404 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100273315854 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101871863204 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1361753785 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12055626469 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.2329268293 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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