The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in once country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two charts depict the changes in ownership of electrical appliances, along with amount of time for housework in households in one country, over a century from 1920 to 2019.
Overall, both charts illustrate two opposite trends in data. The first graph saw a general upward pattern, where its figures rising from the trough at 1920 to the peak at 2019. In contrast, the second one witnessed the reverse tendency, with statistics starting at the summit and ending up at the lowest point.
Particularly, regarding the percentage of households with electrical appliances, refrigerator underwent the most noticeable surge in percentage, from 0% at its introduction to 100% at 1980, then levelling off over 19 years. The data for vacuum cleaner, from 40% at the beginning, rose gradually until 2000, in which most households acquired a vacuum cleaner. The figures for washing machine experienced a considerable fluctuation. Commencing at 30%, the statistics grew to 70% in 1960, however, they dipped by 10% in 1980, then immediately recovering to about 80% at the end of the period.
On the contrary, the number of hours for weekly housework per household started at the summit of the graph, at 50. Throughout years, it significantly dropped to 15% in 1980%, then undergoing a plateau in 2000. At the end, the number slightly hit at 10%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The two charts depict the changes in own...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: VACUUM_CLEANER_HOOVER[1]
Message: This expression is common for American English. Did you mean 'hoover'?
Suggestion: hoover
...velling off over 19 years. The data for vacuum cleaner, from 40% at the beginning, rose gradua...
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Message: This expression is common for American English. Did you mean 'hoover'?
Suggestion: hoover
...00, in which most households acquired a vacuum cleaner. The figures for washing machine experi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, regarding, second, then, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10454545455 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93671543066 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604545454545 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6511321698 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985102617239 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042939712354 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076157374043 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945453670845 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104447389074 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.